Hello :) Hope y'all had a good weekend. This morning's post is by Onyi (@nwaokpoechi). In case you've forgotten, she co-writes The Princess Diaries. So, without further ado, Ladies, Gentlemen, and the others.... *drum roll*
Hi. Today's post is basically a place I was in at a point in my life. And I couldn't write for d longest time until I decided to write down how I felt. Not even sure if it's poetry or prose. I just...wrote. So, here it is. Hope you like it
It is deep. It is spiritual. And God knows it scares the hell out of me. This thing I feel for you.
I wish everyday that I never met you; that I never knew you.
You made me feel good; you made me feel bad. You made me believe in myself, and then you made me feel like a failure.
You made me feel all these wonderful things that I never even knew it was possible to feel, and for those things I’m grateful.
But with you it has always been a rollercoaster ride and you of all people know how it gets when you’ve been on too long.
You make me think and see things in my head; things I want to do with you and to you.
I’m repulsed at myself, by myself.
I need God to forgive me. I can’t do that with you in the picture.
I’m tired of labyrinths. I want straight roads.
20 June, 2011
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18 comments:
Short..concise and real good..
Nice piece n all Ray said.
Thanks guys :D
Concise precise deep!
Well done onyi...
@cecec...agu cho kwanu gbuom biko...gini ka anyi ga eri na otutu!
Thanks ibeta! U just made my day, I swear
Short .. And to the point. I like it.
In fact, I love it. Reminds me of how I was at a time ...
Deep.
Vulnerable.
Sincere.
iLikey
Nice one.
F.
Thanks Deola
I Like :)
beautiful writing... deep :D iLike
hmmmn...like @FoluShaw said...vulnerable...I like it...it's very honest...
Long distance relationship. I was in one for a very long time. I still regret it till date. Well, that's just me sha... Wish you good luck.
I like the way you write, it's so sincere...
Thanks a lot guys. :)
Ha! I love the ending!
i think most people can relate to this, i certainly do!
you want straight roads but you need to take the life of someone who can make u feel this way. It's not healthy. Nice piece.
I had to come and comment on this! LMAO.
Lol @Arebamen. Things aren't that deep yet.
Thanks Terdoh and kitkat.
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